In some countries, students pay their college or university fees, while in some others, government pays for them. Do you think the advantages that government pays the money outweigh the disadvantages?
主体段 1：（利大于弊/弊大于利）理由1 + 论证
主体段 2：（利大于弊/弊大于利）理由2 + 论证
背景句：Universities in the countries worldwide have different financial policies. In some countries, students are required to pay their own tuition. While in others, the government is responsible for the fees.
个人立场：In my opinion, more benefits would be generated if the government pays for students’ fees, instead of transferring the financial stress to them.
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主题句：First and foremost, the government’s financial assistance would relieve young students of the financial burden during their academic pursuit.
举例论证：In recent years, a huge number of universities and colleges around the world have drastically increased their financial requirement towards prospective students. Such change prevents students who are less financially secured yet sufficiently meet the academic criteria from receiving higher education. With the government’s support, they could be partly or fully exempt from the necessity of working and concentrate on their study.
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主题句：In addition, the government’s support would help universities educate, train and prepare more intellectually and professionally competent candidates for all industries.
举例论证：It’s not uncommon that many intelligent and hard-working students have to drop out of school due to their inability to afford the fees, which not only damages their own career prospect but also prevents enterprises from finding capable and competitive employees. If the government’s financial support allows the students to obtain academic qualifications, those students would have the opportunity to participate in the future development of a country.
Some would argue that students should pay the fees on their own, because they’re supposed to be financially independent and some financial stress would urge them to work harder. However, since educating skilled workforce would eventually benefit a country’s economic development in the long run, it should be a society’s shared duty to finance university students’ tuition and living expense. Therefore, I believe that the advantages of governments paying the fees for university students outweigh its disadvantages.
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