雅思大作文范文解析：发达国家超重儿童数量增加是因为快餐店还是父母

## 题目 The number of overweight children in developed countries is increasing. Some people think this is due to problems such as the growing number of fast food outlets. Others believe that parents are to blame for not looking after their children's health.To what extent do you agree with these views? 题型：同意与否 翻译：发达国家超重儿童的数量不断增加。一些人认为是快餐店数量增加造成的，而另一些人认为是父母没有好好照顾孩子的健康。你在多大程度上同意这些观点？ ## 写作结构 开头段：背景介绍 + 个人观点 主体段1：理由 1 + 论证 主体段2：理由 2 + 论证 主体段3：理由 3 + 论证 结尾段：总结理由 + 重申观点 ## 范文分析 ### 开头段 大量证据表明儿童超重的情况日益恶化。 背景句：There is plenty of evidence to suggest that children are overweight and the situation is getting worse, according to the medical experts. 个人立场：I feel there are a number of reasons for this. ### 主体段1 我们周边有很多卖便宜垃圾食品的商店，给那些从不做饭的父母带来了便利。 主题句：Some people blame the fact that we are surrounded by shops selling unhealthy, fatty foods such as chips and fried chicken, at low prices. 递进解释：This has created a whole generation of adults who have never cooked a meal for themselves. If there were fewer of these restaurants, then children would not be tempted to buy take-away food. ### 主体段2 父母放任孩子的体重不断增加，对孩子的饮食习惯不加以引导。 主题句：There is another argument that blames the parents for allowing their children to become overweight. 递进解释：I tend to agree with this view, because good eating habits begin early in life, long before children start to visit fast food outlets. If children are given chips and chocolate rather than nourishing food, or are always allowed to choose what they eat, they will go for the sweet and salty foods every time, and this will carry on throughout their lives. ### 主体段3 孩子们几乎不运动，放学回家就是看电视或者玩游戏。 主题句：There is a third factor, however, which contributes to the situation. Children these days take very little exercise. 递进解释：They do not walk to school. When they get home, they sit in front of the television or their computers and play video games. Not only is this an unhealthy pastime, it also gives them time to eat more junk food. What they need is to go outside and play active games or sport. ### 结尾段 总结理由 + 重申观点 The two views discussed play an equal role in contributing to the problem, but I think we have to encourage young people to be more active, as well as steering them away from fast food outlets and bad eating habits. We need to have a balanced approach. ## 重点表达 blame for 因......怪罪 be surrounded by 被......包围着 fried chicken 炸鸡 be tempted to do sth 被诱惑做某事 take-away food 外卖 nourishing food 有营养的食品 steer away from 远离