雅思大作文范文解析：读大学是否是找到好工作的必要条件

## 题目 Many people say that the only way to guarantee getting a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world of work. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above views? 题型：同意与否 翻译：很多人说，保证找到一份好工作的唯一方法就是完成大学教育课程。其他人声称，毕业后直接开始工作并获得工作经验更好。 您对此观点是否同意？ ## 写作结构 开头段：背景介绍 + 个人立场 主体段 1：（赞同/反对读大学是否是找到好工作的必要条件）理由 1 + 论证 主体段 2：（赞同/反对读大学是否是找到好工作的必要条件）理由 2 + 论证 结尾段：总结理由 + 重申观点 ## 范文解析 ### 开头段 背景介绍“大多数人认为大学学位是获得好工作的唯一途径”，表示“在某些领域确实如此，而在其他领域，学位并不那么有用”。 背景句：It is probably true to say that most people believe that a university degree is the only way to get a good job. 个人立场：I think this is true in certain areas, while in other areas, a degree is not as useful. ### 主体段 1 首先，从大学毕业的另一个好处是，在选择工作时，它可以为您提供更多选择。大多数雇主会对具有学位的候选人留下更深刻的印象，因为它显示出一定程度的智力水平。 主题句：Most employers will be more impressed by a candidate who has a degree than they would be by one who only has high school qualifications because it shows a certain level of intelligence and education, as well as the commitment and self-discipline that is needed In order to study a degree course for three or four years. 举例论证：To begin with, many people have ambitions to become a qualified professional and there is no doubt that becoming a doctor or a lawyer, for example, is only possible with a degree. Another advantage of graduating from university is that it gives you more choices when it comes to choosing a job. ### 主体段 2 另一方面，早期开始你的职业可能会有一些好处，特别是如果你选择的领域通常不需要大学教育。 这适用于想要成为汽车修理工或时装设计师的人，他们不一定从上大学那里获得任何收益。 主题句：On the other hand, there might be some benefit to starting your career early, especially if your chosen field is one which does not typically require a university education. 举例论证：This would apply to somebody who wants to be a car mechanic, or a fashion designer, for instance, who would not necessarily gain anything from going to university. The hands-on experience you gain in your job while others are studying for a degree can give you a distinct advantage. I once read about a man who left school at sixteen and went on to become a wealthy and successful investment broker. He claimed that he had learned all he needed to know by working in his chosen field and that he could not have done any better by getting a degree. ### 结尾段 总结理由 + 重申观点：虽然没有上大学就找到一份好工作是可能的。但一些职业，如法律，要求你拥有学位，如上所述，大学学位可能会在寻找工作时打开更多的门。 So, to conclude, it is possible to get a good job without going to university. Having said that, some professions, such as the law, require you to have a degree and as stated above a University degree could potentially open more doors when looking for a job. ## 重点表达 self-discipline 自律 when it comes to 当涉及到... it is possible to 做...是可能的