雅思大作文范文解析：公司在社区附近建工厂的利弊

## 题目 A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. 题型：利弊分析 翻译：一家公司宣布想在你所处的社区附近建一座大型工厂。讨论此举的利弊以及对社区的影响。 ## 写作结构 开头段：背景介绍+个人观点 主体段 1：弊端+论证 主体段 2：弊端+论证 主体段 3：弊端+论证 结尾段：让步+重申观点 ## 范文解析 ### 开头段 背景介绍“新工厂会对社区产生一些积极影响，例如就业机会、拉动经济增长” ，并表明个人立场弊大于利。 背景介绍：New factories often bring many good things to a community, such as jobs and increased prosperity. 个人观点：However, in my opinion, the benefits of having a factory are outweighed by the risks. That is why I oppose the plan to build a factory near my community. ### 主体段 1 大型工厂对城市有所破坏，尤其是对环境的破坏。长远来看，还会影响人们的身体健康。 主题句：I believe that this city would be harmed by a large factory. 论证：In particular, a factory would destroy the quality of the air and water in town. Factories bring smog and pollution.In the long run, the environment will be hurt and people’s health will be affected. Having a factory is not worth that rise. ### 主体段 2 虽然工厂会带来更多的就业机会，推动人口增长，但是这样的增长真的好吗？ 主题句：Of course, more jobs will be created by the factory. Our population will grow. To accommodate more workers, more homes and stores will be needed. Do we really want this much growth, so fast? 论证：If our town is going in growth, I would prefer slow growth with good planning. I don’t want to see rows of cheaply constructed townhouses. Our quality of life must be considered. ### 主体段 3 工厂带来的增长也会很大程度地改变城市。 主题句：I believe that this growth will change our city too much. 论证： I love my hometown because it is a safe, small town. It is also easy to travel here. If we must expand to hold new citizens, the small-town feel will be gone. I would miss that greatly. ### 结尾段 让步+重申观点：虽然工厂在某些方面是好的，但依然弊大于利。 A factory would be helpful in some ways. However, I feel that the dangers are greater than the benefits. I cannot support a plan to build a factory here, and hope that others feel the same way. ## 重点表达 in the long run 从长远来看 be worth sth/doing sth. 值得做某事 a row of/rows of 一排/几排