雅思大作文范文解析：成功的体育人士该不该比其他职业的人挣的钱多

## 题目 Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 题型：双边讨论 翻译：成功的体育人士比其他职业的人挣的钱多。有些人认为这是完全应该的，而另一些人认为这不公平。讨论两种观点并给出自己意见。 ## 写作结构 开头段：背景介绍 主体段1：（分析反方观点）理由 + 论证 主体段2：（分析正方观点）理由 + 论证 结尾段：表明自己观点 + 汇总理由 ## 范文分析 ### 开头段 由于媒体的不断关注，我国的体育专业人士已经成为明星和名人，像电影明星一样过着奢华的生活。 背景介绍：As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries. Just like movie stars, they live extravagant lifestyles with huge houses and cars. ### 主体段 1 （分析反方观点）许多人认为对体育人士的奖励不公平，尤其是与那些顶尖的医生和科学家相比。 主题句：Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibility of governing the country. 递进解释：However, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds. Instead, they reflect the public popularity of sport in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate. So the notion of ‘fairness’ is not the issue. ### 主体段 2 （分析正方观点）那些认为体育人士薪水合理的人可能觉得真正有天赋的专业体育人并不多，巨额的薪水是对他们专业技能和付出的认可。 主题句：Those who feel that sports stars’ salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful. 递进解释：Competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform in their relatively short career. The pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the spotlight. So all of these factors may justify the huge earnings. ### 结尾段 表明自己观点 + 汇总理由：认为体育明星赚的钱比电影明星的巨额收入更合理，这表明我们国家对体育行业的重视高于对职业和成就的重视。 Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicates that our society places more value on sport than on more essential professions and achievements. ## 重点表达 constant media attention 媒体的持续关注 top surgeons or research scientists 顶尖的医生和科学家 contribution to society 对社会的贡献 a recognition of... 对......的认可 play value on... 重视...