雅思大作文范文解析：如何解决人口“爆炸”问题

## 题目 Counties such as China, India and Japan have unsustainable population growths. In fact many experts are of the opinion that the population ‘explosion’ which is now a very worrying concern, is the most serious threat to life on this planet. Give some suggestions to address this problem. 题型：问题解决 翻译：中国，印度和日本等县的人口并没有持续增长。事实上，许多专家认为，人口“爆炸”现在是一个非常令人担忧的问题，是对这个星球上生命的最严重威胁。提出一些解决此问题的建议。 ## 写作结构 开头段：背景引入 + 话题介绍 主体段 1：可采取的措施 1 主体段 2：可采取的措施 2 结尾段：总结概括 ## 范文解析 ### 开头段 交代背景“人口增长不可接受的主要原因之一是缺乏对环境的了解。人口过多是造成水，土壤和空气污染的主要原因，它也常常是饥饿甚至战争的原因”，表示“可以有办法解决问题”。 交代背景：It is true that the population ‘explosion’ which has taken place over the last century, is a very serious problem. One of the main reasons for this unacceptable population growth is a lack of understanding about the environment. Over-population is the major reason for the pollution of water, soil and air. It is also often the cause of starvation and even wars. 话题介绍：Experts have put forward many suggestions to address this problem. The following are just a few of these. ### 主体段 1 我们对抗人口增长的最重要武器是教育，可以用教育来培养年轻人。 主题句：The most important weapon we have to fight population growth is education. 递进解释：This should start at a very early age. Before children even go to school, TV cartoons and children’s programs can be used to educate the very young. At high school level, students can be taught about the problem more directly. At university level, scholarships should be made available to students who wish to study further in this field. International exchange groups may also help to increase awareness. ### 主体段 2 控制人口增长的另一个重要手段是提高税收。通过给予这些夫妇特殊的税收减免，也可以使人们只有一个孩子。 主题句：Another important means of controlling population growth is to disadvantage people who have more than one or two children. This can be done, as it is in China, by means of a higher tax. 递进解释：Although it is controversial, persons who come forward to be sterilized could be given a sum of money. It may also be possible to make it advantageous for people to have only one child by giving such couples a special tax deduction. ### 结尾段 总结概括：还有许多与人口过多有关的问题，如犯罪率增加，文盲和污染。因此，通过解决一个问题，我们也将解决其他问题。 It should also be possible to make contraception devices free to the public and easily obtainable. This problem is a very difficult one to address but we should make every effort to do so. There are many other problems which are related to over-population such as increasing crime, illiteracy and pollution. So by addressing one problem we would be addressing the others as well. ## 重点表达 it is true that 做...是正确的 address this problem 解决问题